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Stuck On You

I'm a wad of gum,
Waiting patiently
You're my lowly victim,
So unsuspectingly!

All gooey on a sidewalk,
Diggin' your classy shoes
A sticky treat is lurking,
And you don't have a clue!

I can see your sole,
I even know your size
SQUISH! I finally got you,
My, what a sweet surprise!

I'm laughing as you curse,
Then scurry to the grass
Strings of sticky chaos,
Is now a pesky mass!

Scrape your gummy shoe,
Along that rugged curb
Have I gotten to you?
Your face looks quite disturbed!

Remove that soily heel,
Submit to your defeat
You look like Captain Ahab,
While limping down the street!

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  1. Date: 7/24/2013 4:46:00 AM
    - Like it .... like the humor,Milton.- Well written! - Thank you! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 8:06:00 PM
    Your poem is fun and whimsical. I like point of views that are "out of the box".

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 7:22:00 PM
    This is funny! You may want to change the form to Personification.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/23/2013 7:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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