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Stuck

Have you ever felt like you are stuck at a point where your whole world is upside down? All you can do is frown All these obstacles approach you and your stuck trying to listen to these fools your mind is so confused dont know if they truly care living your dreams in fear all you can do is turn back and use for that one little feeling of ease and for your world to feel at peace why cant no one truly see the trobles you face on the inside blocking the life you want to live by each and everyday faced with choices too weak to block out the voices that are trying to pull you away and block your success all the way as i lay weakened, the days are still moving and i have to question my decisions and what am i truly doing. stuck on a path to destroy me and i been too blind to see got to be strong and pick up the pieces all i can ask for is some help please.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/22/2016 9:06:00 PM
Amy, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 8/24/2012 2:04:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Amy. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2012 2:04:00 AM
what a brave and courageous poet you are, embarking on deeply profound verse, yet in simple language usage that pratically everyone can understand. Just excellent verse here. Thanks for sharing this morning read, these are the poems I look to read, of life's challenges and hopeful am I to a sequell that is uplifting a day to come! ..... Cindy
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Date: 8/23/2012 12:59:00 AM
I'm not going to lie to you Amy. The best thing that I got from this poem is the line, "As I lay weakened, the days are still moving". To me, that was profound. As for the rest of the poem, it was just ok. But if you can get that ONE thing that makes people stop and think, then it was all worth while. I don't think you're stuck, I think you've found release. Thanks for making me think Amy. Rockman
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