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Struggle To the Top

his heart is poetic yet he regrets it for respect he sticks his neck out its life and death kid he give's words depth and yet his soul hasn't left running out of breath feels like hes been punched in the chest he knows he's cursed but he knows hes blessed misery and obsession lead him to success of his first lesson always keep the opposition double guessing and if he could make a suggestion Dont come to close he fires like a smith a wesson but dont be scared hes just hurt from the last person he let in

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Date: 4/24/2024 12:37:00 AM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/9/2016 1:54:00 AM
well done. LINDA
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