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Struggle of a Moss Rose Petal

for a fresh fragrance the tender petal bearing - pang of her life time.

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L. J. Carber

Date: 6/7/2020 11:03:00 AM

I like the personification--congrats!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/7/2020 11:59:00 PM

Thank you Carber...

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/6/2020 12:50:00 PM

Pang of her lifetime....only you could have dived deep into the emotions of the rose petal. Such a thought provoking flow of words. Congratulations on your win Jenish. Blessings :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/6/2020 11:52:00 PM

Thank you Aditi for your delightful comment.. And congrats on your great win.. Takecare always...

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 6/5/2020 6:16:00 PM

Three lines that say so much, everything that lives struggles until it dies, then we will have everlasting peace. I loved it all especially the first line. So happy to see you are writing Jenish. God Bless you and your family...

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/6/2020 11:51:00 PM

Thank you Shirley for you encouragement.. We are all rose petals struggling to blossom.. Once opened, we will spread our wonderful unique fragrance all around.. Stay safe..