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Stronger

Strange are these feeling that beseech me overcome by the aroma of the not yet crisp applewood bacon sizzling on the grill not realizing I have been burned Sitting at a table meant for two my eyes are glued to my book but my thoughts are only of you that killer smile and those angel eyes It has been long way to long since I have cooked only for one a simple tear trails my pallid cheek and for a moment I allow myself to be weak Even though I miss you so I know I have to be much stronger

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Date: 1/28/2016 9:22:00 AM
The bliss from this page cannot be exhausted. This is incredible and wonderful. Great lines and an awesome 7
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Date: 1/21/2016 7:17:00 PM
certainly you've to be more stronger...heartfelt write Tim
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Date: 1/20/2016 2:57:00 PM
Very powerful and great , well expressed my friend, I really enjoyed reading it, hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 1/19/2016 11:54:00 PM
This is so powerful and heartfelt, fantastic poem Tim!
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Date: 1/18/2016 4:07:00 PM
I can feel the wind of change and sadness it brings when we are left alone , without the ones we love .. A sad poem Tim , hope its fiction .
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Date: 1/18/2016 4:29:00 PM
It is fiction...I don't have any bacon ;p ...hope you are feeling better. hugs
Date: 1/18/2016 8:58:00 AM
It is not easy getting used to change, and this feeling is well transmitted in these lines of yours, Tim. We usually say that it's wise to move on, but a heavy heart and heavy feet are not always ready to follow what the mind dictates! // paul
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Date: 1/18/2016 8:12:00 AM
- A touching poem ..... however, your love is great, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/17/2016 4:34:00 PM
such sad imagery and so full of longing Tim:-( hugs Jan xx
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