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Strolls Home Through the Corn

strolls home through the corn and sees lights at the windows - - tackles intruder

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Joe Maverick

Date: 1/28/2012 2:29:00 PM

I've enjoyed this a lot Jack..! also thank you for the positive comment..

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/24/2012 8:17:00 AM

Nice one enjoyed from you. Your wonderful, loved, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2012 12:02:00 AM

hahaha, I'm sorry. Maybe it's not meant to be funny. But I am thinking of the picture and how you did this so matter of factly. you are just too cool, jack!! CAll you jack the knife. heehee

The Situation

Date: 1/23/2012 7:28:00 PM

ok die hard

The Situation
Date: 1/23/2012 7:28:00 PM

must have been smaller than you

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 1/23/2012 5:39:00 PM

A surprising third line...after very effectively penned, visually perfect first two. Good job!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/23/2012 5:34:00 PM

Ah, he must be braver than I, Jack. Now this is the kind of haiku I really like! Great work -- nice building of suspense. Love, Carolyn

Judy Ball

Date: 1/23/2012 5:32:00 PM

WoW! Imagine coming home before you're expected to and finding someone there whoo shouldn't be. Scarey stuff. Great job here. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/23/2012 2:35:00 PM

Great one..Enjoyed reading this on this rainy afternoon..Very excellent surprise at the end..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/23/2012 2:14:00 PM

Haha I love how you approached this poem! Just a little stroll, happily along, then the light on at the windows, and then Bamb...the intruder! Wow, Jack, great transition! I think your poem is quite enjoyable and I thought it fabulous! Awesome Work!!