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Stroking

. Thus sat I athwart her boarding as the train’s whistle bellowed I panting stroking mine beard in anticipation mine pen and slip excited to cast each her chary glints when CRACK back mine head mine consort her ring baring jealous

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/20/2013 8:14:00 AM

Hahaha! the poet... Well done~A.O

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2013 11:48:00 PM

hey, where is a new one??? I am waiting!!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/24/2013 6:25:00 AM

wow, James, this is amazing poetry, so visual, just love it

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/20/2013 4:14:00 AM

good as always, JP! nice to see you stop by, jimbo

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 3/17/2013 6:52:00 PM

I wondered how tame you would be with a title like that James, you kept on the shy side but delivered a message that made me smile. Always a treat to read your gems! Love, Elizabeth

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/16/2013 5:57:00 AM

I wonder how close was that train?...Sara

Daver Austin

Date: 3/13/2013 12:11:00 PM

Such a penman thou art. I, at first did poorly diefine "pant." Duh. You are, though, a swordsman as well. Great stuff. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2013 1:27:00 AM

there you are again with a NEW poem. YAYYYY. At last, James. Get going and put up more!!! I enjoyed this one.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/8/2013 9:44:00 PM

Awesome verse james! It's been a while since I have read your poetry. I have missed it and will be reading some more! Always, Laura

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/8/2013 4:50:00 AM

Hi James..this poetry is so you and so beautiful.My little missy Christina is six months old now ..She s a very active baby.but adorable.Hope Noah is doing well..bet is growing:)

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/7/2013 8:03:00 PM

Dear Sire James, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I am honored to be the first to Comment on this YOUR POETIC Tapestry.I just Love the style YOU write in. Grasping!! Do YOU have a beard? Welcome to the men with beards Club. I feel like a heel as I very seldom comment to YOU and YOU are ALWAYS giving me such Gracious Comments. I will try to change my writting habits. Integer 2 is how Liege was born. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry