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The silhouette of crooked figures Amply lean against a wall Speaking in a foreign language As the foremost starts to crawl. Out from the window I look on the street Robots are moving quickly As they stare at their feet. The planet is turning backward Time continues on And to think the robots walking Moved the earth beneath their stomp. The bookshelf is leaning As it threatens to crush I put my hand out to stop it And it tells me to hush? ...What? Confused and lost I stumble down the stair Finding a way out Then stopped in dead air The crooked figure now before me I gaze with glistening eyes Reaches in my chest And clenches it's prize. Now a moving robot I stomp down the street Not noticing anything But my walking feet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/24/2010 3:38:00 PM
Well.. I'm speechless. I loooove this! Like. I'm half sure why, half not sure. But it just like, grabs you. The strangeness is just gravitating. Some words seem to grab hold and don't let go. And I love the ending. Amazing poem all the way through. Going to my faves!!
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Date: 10/1/2010 11:19:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration Parker. Love, Carol
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