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STRING THEORY

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ bitterness fades fast as serene forgiveness blooms harmony takes hold ~~~~~~~~~ those unseen strings bring healing hearts at last ~~~~~~~~~ unseen strings, unheard melodies

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Bill Baker

Date: 5/19/2024 11:08:00 AM

Beautiful, creative poetry, Sara. You are becoming a poetry guru. There's magic is your words, where hidden truths reside, me thinks. You're #1 Fan, Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/18/2024 10:32:00 AM

Original and imaginative phrases are written. Dear Sara, your introductory verse encapsulates the core of your poetry. Overcoming bitterness and stubbornness might be a challenge, but once accomplished, it enables us to forgive, forget, and progress.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/18/2024 5:13:00 PM

Your words echo my feelings, dear Sotto. Glad you found my poem original with imaginative phrases. I appreciate those kind words. Have a great evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/18/2024 5:47:00 AM

Your opening stanza spells the essence of your poem, Sara. --bitterness fades fast as serene forgiveness blooms harmony takes hold--powerful words, true to life!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/18/2024 5:12:00 PM

I agree with you Vijay about the opening stanza. I'm glad you found my poem powerful and truthful. Appreciate your visit this evening, Sara

Silent One

Date: 5/18/2024 4:57:00 AM

It can be difficult to overcome bitterness and stubborness... but when we do, we can forgive and forget and move on..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/18/2024 5:11:00 PM

I agree with you, Silent One. Forgiveness allows me to untie the strings that could lead to vengeful words and acts. Not my style. Thanks for stopping by, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/18/2024 3:52:00 AM

Creative lines penned. I especially like the last one which could apply to so many situations. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/18/2024 4:37:00 AM

awww, thank you, Sara K. I liked the last line too. Also reminded me of the strings on certain instruments. Have a splendid day, hugs, Sara B

Marugu Mo

Date: 5/18/2024 1:33:00 AM

I thought I was going to read a poem about the physics theory. But this will do well for the poets. Enjoyed

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/18/2024 4:36:00 AM

I appreciate your visit. I suppose string theory is different for poets when compared to physicists. Glad you enjoyed my poem. Wishing you a pleasant day, Sara

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/18/2024 12:10:00 AM

so subtle and beautiful, to you talk also about the physical theory of strings, , i heard about , but don't really understand and conceive the idea, thanks for the enjoyable poetry Sara

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/18/2024 4:35:00 AM

thank you for your visit Yann. I, too, don't understand string theory but I do understand poetry and matters of the heart and spirit. Glad you found my poem enjoyable with its subtle beauty. Have a splendid day, Sara

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/17/2024 9:58:00 PM

Gentleness with forgiveness wins in this poem. We'll done.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/18/2024 4:33:00 AM

thank you for dropping by, Hilda! I'm grateful for your kind words...have a pleasant Saturday, hugs, Sara

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/17/2024 9:46:00 PM

A very unique style with deep meaning, Sara:)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/18/2024 4:33:00 AM

awww, thank you! Appreciate your kind and complimentary words. Have a splendid day, Joanna! hugs, Sara