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String haiku

String Haiku       Charles Henderson contest
Theme – sea haiku

bare feet sift soft sand 
waves whisper foamy secrets
of bright days to come

sand shimmers with shells
waves tumble in unison
on a glistening day

shimmering sundown
a butter sun melts the sky
on a golden beach

sand laden waves
pound craggy sea-crusted rocks
storm sky hunkers low

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  1. Date: 2/24/2011 6:33:00 AM
    Congratulations Eiken on your well deserved win for your poem in Charles Henderson's contest "String Haiku". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/22/2011 11:35:00 AM
    Eiken, has your muse taken a nap? Missed seeing new work from you. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 7:19:00 PM
    Beautiful string Haiku Eiken. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 12:10:00 AM
    This is such a wonderful string of haiku, Eiken-- I love the imagery you give here-- especially that "butter" sun-- you got me smiling all through out this piece :) way to go for you :) Congrats!

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 5:15:00 PM
    I can see why Charles chose your entry to be among the winners. Congratulations on winning in his contest.

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 12:19:00 PM
    Delighted to see your poem in the winners' circle, Eiken. Congratulations! Love, carolyn

  1. Date: 2/14/2011 10:48:00 PM
    This reads like an abbreviated tale of a day at the beach described VERY beautifully. Congratulations, Eiken.

  1. Date: 2/14/2011 7:49:00 PM
    Super congrats Eiken on your winning poem in the string Haiku contest with this brilliant beauty luv.. enjoy.. Happy Valentine's Day..

  1. Date: 2/14/2011 7:33:00 PM
    Eiken, Congratulations on your honored poem win. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/14/2011 6:17:00 PM
    Wonderful imagery !Congrats Eiken on your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 2/14/2011 6:13:00 PM
    Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Eiken

  1. Date: 2/14/2011 4:48:00 PM
    Very nice. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/14/2011 5:54:00 AM
    I am speechless, Eiken! So well written Haiku for the contest! Alles Gute und viel Glück!! ....Gert

  1. Date: 2/9/2011 4:21:00 PM
    You take us from a bright summer day to the storm clouds approaching. These storms come up quickly here on the beach in Florida, Eiken. You have described the scene perfectly in your string haiku. Best wishes in Charles' contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/8/2011 10:18:00 PM
    I just love your imagery. Because I love the sea and beach. So beautiful. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/8/2011 2:59:00 PM
    Nice continuity you have maintained in this write on the theme of the sea, Eiken