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Striking the Embers Burning Hot

Fear you're trapped in the lie begging to believe anything other afraid of the truth shutting down opposition Whatever articles you have swallowed lacks manners wallowing in muck disturbed by correction seeking pity to rise above such human weakness forgiving error Acknowledge the fault of your own downfall wrong will never be right answering the question pride treating wisdom as the worm that ate the apple

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Date: 8/30/2023 3:16:00 PM
Quite a poetic indictment Liam. Maybe we see a little bit of ourselves in it? If so, time to make the change
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/13/2023 1:47:00 PM
I meant Tom
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/13/2023 1:41:00 PM
Every day I make many purposes of ammendment, because like many I believed the lies as truth, now that the cobwebs are removed smiling, it gives the heart and soul more peace, bless you for the wonderful comment Paul

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