Street Crows

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Dedicated to the homeless

Mr. Seagull, Have you seen Mr. and Mrs. Crow? Oh my, I'm worried about them, Where did they go? The Ravens' answer, "They didn’t say, we don't know. Eviction dispelled them far away, and with nothing to eat. Nowhere to sleep, and the last of the flock left for skid row. Like the Byrd family, scattered. They flew out of formation, F.Y.I. they're beat, Broken. In search of a new underpass. A new city, such a pity. Meandering, and struggling in tow. To find shade in this scorching August heat. Forced to move on and hide their pride. Trying to begin once again, A new start, an old low."

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 11/3/2023 11:19:00 AM

Fun one Anaya :)

I Am Anaya
Date: 11/3/2023 11:30:00 AM

Thanks, DD! :)

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 9/24/2022 7:36:00 PM

Yes, sadly this is the world we live in. Our tax dollars should be put to work helping the homeless and those struggling to make ends meet. But all we hear from politians are empty promises and lies as they feather their own nests with big expensive properties and vacation homes all over the world. A cleverly penned representation Anaya.

I Am Anaya
Date: 9/25/2022 12:25:00 PM

Thank you for your comment, Anne E Sangster, and your opinion is much appreciated, glad for your visit!

Robert Gorelick

Date: 6/3/2022 10:31:00 AM

"The Crows" What an apt name for such an ubiquitous seemingly insolvable problem. Well penned and also a clever metaphor. Robert

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/9/2022 1:46:00 PM

Thank you, Robert, your poem "A Shamed City" such a great poem states that there were 57,000 unhoused in L.A. last year. Now it’s 68,000, growing with elections near, this is unacceptable! All the voting in the world has done nothing. I am grateful for your kind visit. I Am Anaya

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/23/2022 3:44:00 PM

Hello I Am Amaya, very nicely done. Enjoy your evening my friend.

I Am Anaya
Date: 2/20/2022 1:58:00 PM

Hi Darlene, 57,000 unhoused in L.A. last year. Now it’s 68,000, growing, and with elections near, this is unacceptable! All the voting in the world has done nothing. Thank you for your visit. You too enjoy your evening. I Am Anaya

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/26/2021 9:29:00 AM

Profundity…”a new low”

I Am Anaya
Date: 12/26/2021 4:40:00 PM

Great insight of the homeless helps me, Thank you so much.