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Stream of Subconscious

Life can pull you down. Pull you into a thousand slow burning pieces. Then the very things that fell apart slowly flow toward anarchy. To lament in the sea of chaos is to be down and out swallowed by a bruise. But one can always choose. New inspirations can make one see each puzzle piece of the things that fell apart are seeds of forward momentum. Every hurt, leaves a cut, a scar. There is always a flip side to this negative which rests in virtuous blessed marks. Marks in the road that lead you to where you are, in-between the thick of a coveted heart. Moving forward into the abyss, with a little candle is better, than all the volcano scars of all our troubled pasts.

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Date: 9/9/2015 2:45:00 PM
:) SKAT
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Date: 6/24/2015 1:23:00 AM
Hi Robert Fox, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/22/2015 3:33:00 PM
Robert, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Robert Fox
Date: 6/23/2015 11:23:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 6/22/2015 2:33:00 PM
- Welcome to P Soup, Robert ! - A poem that warms your heart or relieve your pain ... share your own poems here with us - Write poems and send it out into the world, I look forward to your next poem :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Robert Fox
Date: 6/23/2015 11:23:00 PM
Thank you :)

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