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'stream of Liberty'

water tumbling down saturating deep within to my nucleus purging insecurities like a stream of liberty Contest Name: Write Me A Rippling Stream Sponsor: Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~ By: Wilma N. Neels Date: 03/06/2011
030620111455 5th Place

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Date: 6/9/2011 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2011 1:36:00 AM
with just a few lines, you make a big difference, wilms! my happy congrats on your real swell winning spot!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/7/2011 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/6/2011 6:51:00 AM
Congrats Wilma on your win..very insightful write here.
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Date: 6/6/2011 6:50:00 AM
So much meaning in so few words. Lovely. Many congrats Wilma.
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Date: 6/5/2011 10:20:00 PM
Congratulations Wilma, with your win in my contest with this beautiful poem~
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Date: 6/5/2011 9:55:00 PM
oh, how original, wilms... congrats big time..:) huggs
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:41:00 PM
Congrats Wilma on your wonderful win in Constance's contest with this splendid write my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 6/4/2011 10:45:00 PM
a very interesting title and line in the poem, Wilma. A stream of liberty. I always enjoy seeing your new daily poem!! Luv, andrea
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Date: 6/4/2011 2:42:00 PM
oh how I wish it was that easy, nice strong write! Thanks for all your nice comments! Light & Love
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Date: 6/4/2011 1:46:00 PM
Enjoyed this piece Wilma.!
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Date: 6/4/2011 12:35:00 PM
Dear Wilma, I love the way the water purifies your spirit. You really capture a special feeling here. It's nice to be back reading poetry again. (But I still wish I were fishing. LOL) Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/4/2011 7:27:00 AM
Your talent is unparrelled in this write... I amazing take on the picture and the contest.. A winner from your amazing mind...with Love Michael
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Date: 6/3/2011 8:39:00 AM
Best wishes for the contest Wilma. This is a great entry. Have a great weekend Em :)
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Date: 6/3/2011 8:23:00 AM
Very Nice..!!!!
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Date: 6/3/2011 7:29:00 AM
wow this one is deep! love how you say so much in just 5 lines, Wilma :) wonderful write and metaphor here :) mwahugs to you :)
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Date: 6/3/2011 6:29:00 AM
I love this ripple willma,always c.c
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