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Stream and Life

The clearness and the song of stream is gone When merges in the river With a load of churned earth Look at the rivers how they run like life Through wood and mead, shade and sun, Sometimes swift, sometimes slow, +++++++ May 29, 2014 Form: Kimo (Syllable count 23+23= 46) Contest:Let's try a little Kimo by Amy Green

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Date: 6/2/2014 2:57:00 AM
A wonderful write, so mellow, sublime.
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Date: 5/29/2014 2:55:00 PM
lovely write, dr ram
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Date: 5/29/2014 5:06:00 AM
a superb poem Ram gl in contest hugs
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