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Stray

Mangled and muddy a limp could be seen spat on and bullied when others were mean Head hangs to the ground scrounging a meal cast out of her comfort from a love thought as real Tiptoeing the banks of a slow moving stream basking in sunshine seen in yesterday's dream Spied a reflection for who is this cat one who is ugly mangy and fat Eyes that are lost no purpose nor soul sadly surrendered hardened he strolls Purrs echo the night as empty meadows he roams searching for daisies and a place to call home

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/30/2016 12:20:00 AM
Heartbreaking!!!! I have rescued and gave home to many in my lifetime and found homes for many more. I will never understand how humans can be so cruel and indifferent to this beautiful creatures. Great Personification, Tim. Personifications are my niche in poetry.
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Date: 1/25/2016 10:57:00 AM
You touched my heart and made me tear up. I'm a big one for helping out strays... All my critters were rescued off the streets... Lost 2 to old age this year... With another one almost gone too... She's the light of my life... With Dragon of course...
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Date: 1/23/2016 7:11:00 PM
oh Tim, you have created a sad one that also reflects the loneliness of the stray. I REALLY like this one. SEVEN
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Date: 1/23/2016 9:13:00 AM
: ) Love this one Tim!!! You're so good at personification !
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Date: 1/23/2016 6:17:00 AM
- A terrible fate ..... no love - A deeply moving poem Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/23/2016 3:01:00 AM
well written Tim...
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Date: 1/22/2016 5:49:00 PM
The imagery here is great, loved the poem, not sure if this about a cat or me though.
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Date: 1/22/2016 1:11:00 PM
aww this is so sad Tim am more used to your upbeat romantic writes:-( hugs Jan xx 7
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Date: 1/22/2016 11:15:00 AM
Aww, Tim, that poor guy, Maybe he'll meet a sweet feline chick in the daisies. ;) Nice!!
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