Get Your Premium Membership

Strangly Odd 3

Many years have now past an old grand father talks as with grand kids he walks the seeds he with them has cast His view is that with us they abide gradual have been the changes as with us they mingle over the ages intermarriage has spread out wide Now there are no earthlings or aliens just an inter galaxy race who do things to their own pace all now become Freudians This is how he explains the unexplainable he cautions them to take care unless their lives are left bare as along the path we all stumble I leave you now on things to ponder ask yourself are we alone? do we with each other have to atone can we meet each other with candor? Or will we always fear and treat with suspicion that which is not quite normal? checking out each other's aural can we ever join together in fission?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/3/2014 4:21:00 PM
I love the unusual theme of this poem, and the questions it poses. Makes one ponder, we never know what the future may discover.... I think some folks are more in sync with the truth than others....perhaps your grandfather was one! PS......thank you so much for my placement in the recent "Norse" contest.....I'm glad you liked my entry!! Thanks again!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/27/2014 6:13:00 PM
a sci-fi kind of poem!! You are a wise lady, Shadow, and there is wisdom in what you have the grandfather teaching the kids. Also very interesting what you told me about those birds thumping the ground. they are SMART birds!!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/27/2014 7:23:00 AM
Great one my friend. Fine questions to ponder. Questions that themselves point towards a goal and answer. Walk an honest path, turn aside greed and wrath. Be gentle in your thoughts and deeds, heal the hurts stop the bleeds.. So nice to read this inspirational write this morn!! Thanks .
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs