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Stranger

Two good willed strangers from our social order. In the grip of heated attack. One fails to abide by the rules and borders. The other poised, ready to strike back: ... "You don't know me, wretched scum! Our hearts will never beat to the same drum. I don't appreciate your business. Spit on your soul, claim God as witness!" ... "Be that way, strange lunatic! Your lack of manners makes me sick. I tipped you 10%, you have no ground. Now face my wrath that knows no bound!" ... If I had known, when I stood there What strange encounters I would share, Between two folk who hate their kind, Who'd rather fight than speak their mind. I'd wish upon a lonely star: "Get me the hell out of here, somewhere far Away from so called 'good intentions' Masking deep conflicting tensions." ... Now the star does answer me: "You are the stranger, can't you see? There'll come a time when you'll believe This world is not as you perceive. The tensions you speak of are your own Now learn they spawned the world you're shown. A world of pain, torment, and guilt. To hide from Love, this world you built."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/3/2009 2:47:00 AM
this si different--im glad my fingertips led me to reading you YONI--Your writes are handcrafted masterpiece---------well penned once more-------charma:-)
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Date: 5/8/2009 8:13:00 AM
Your mail didn't come through, Yoni. There was an error message. As for King Arthur, the bodies buried in Cadbury Hill are thought to be his and others who lived in his castle. Remnants of a castle were found.
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Date: 5/7/2009 8:08:00 PM
Wow, did you really witness this confrontation, Yoni? It's mind-boggling how people can treat each other this way. If I saw this, I'd want to hide from the "world of pain" as well. Outstanding poem with a story that holds the readers attention! Love it! Carolyn
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Date: 5/7/2009 8:06:00 PM
BRAVO my friend! A well-paced piece that holds the reader's interest, and has so much to say... Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 5/4/2009 7:08:00 AM
Yoni, You say so much with your poetry. It is always a pleasure to read and to think about your writes. There is a good peaceful place here on earth, you know. Your star whispered it. It is inside of each good heart. We need to let more goodness out. Perhaps fear keeps it in....Guess who know. Keep writing. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/4/2009 5:54:00 AM
Yes, I thinking wonderful thoughts of "You" the other day!? Your Heaven given gifts as a writer! Your youthful age somewhat still! The sincere love You seem to encompass! You shall be a great Light someday!? Much Warmth and Blessings To You and Yours Always Yoni~Smile~Keep Writing, John!:) Bye ~
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Date: 5/3/2009 6:46:00 PM
Wow, very deep. Loved it. :)
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Date: 5/3/2009 6:36:00 PM
Deep, deep, deep, ... well writ ... good and full of inspiration. Praises for the art
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