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Strange Touch

I stood,i crawled,i walked,i ran. Till i fell in frazzel, Ahead i stood in staring, But the long distance stucked me in discouragement. I pushed in fatique ankles My body became heavier than i can bear, I felt my soul leaving me, As my body combat with my spirit. I was already letting go, Till i felt the touch from behind. A touch so cold as of snow. Cold winds blew into my ears, As strength dazzled into my bones. All that left me came back. As i woke in the new strength. I felt the touch so cold. Yes a strange touch, The touch of an Angel am sure.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/17/2013 9:32:00 AM
Good concept, and really cool poem. If you are open to constructive criticism though, I would suggest adding a rhythm to the piece, make it flow. Good job on the piece! -Beastboy
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