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Strange Birds

As he sits on the bench thinking of the departed soul, The dark night rumbles,making the owls silent, then comes strange birds with fierce looks, ready to devour,suck and cause panic in the city. Olusegun Arowolo Date:9-20-2015 Contest:Four lines contest sponsored by broken wings

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Date: 9/28/2015 9:48:00 PM
Olusegun, Congratulations on your Four Line win. Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 9/26/2015 6:01:00 PM
I found this quite chilling congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/25/2015 7:42:00 PM
Hi..I enjoyed this write Olu..but watch your spacing......rumbles , devour , should be rumbles, devour, ...also...then come strange birds....I hope you find my constructive criticism helpful and I look forward to receiving your comments and reading more of your great poetry....Peter
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Date: 9/24/2015 11:53:00 PM
Wonderful expressions olusegun! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 9/24/2015 3:40:00 PM
ooh, kind of spooky!! Congrats for your win here, Olusegun!
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Date: 9/24/2015 7:57:00 AM
The predators in the dark, nicely done win :)
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Date: 9/23/2015 6:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Olusegun. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/23/2015 12:40:00 PM
Olusegun, very interesting visual with this. Gives me the creeps. Soul suckers out for their nightly feeding.
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