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It sits staring blankly at me It says come here just try and see Helping is what I do Come on over is only plea Free to come, free to go sweet pea Try it bid weight adieu AAB,AAB, 8,8,6..8,8,6 Sponsor:Dr. Ram Contest:

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/9/2011 8:54:00 AM
congrats on the hm!
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Date: 8/8/2011 4:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tail-Rhyme" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/8/2011 10:43:00 AM
When we seek advice from others. Sometimes we'd rather stay under the covers. To crawl out in the cold cruel world. Leaves to truth to be unfurled.
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Date: 8/7/2011 11:10:00 AM
Quick congrats before I get logged out again!
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Date: 8/7/2011 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations Sara on your win in Dr.Mehta's contest.Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 8/7/2011 6:50:00 AM
wonderful, sara..a joy to read with matching congrats on your glowing win! :) huggs
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Date: 8/6/2011 1:08:00 AM
Congrats Sara on your HM in the contest my friend with this wonderful write .. very interesting piece luv.. enjoy honor..
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Date: 8/5/2011 9:26:00 PM
what is it, Sara? My mind is blank tonight i think! Congrats on the HM. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/5/2011 5:17:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in my contest, sara
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Date: 8/2/2011 6:39:00 PM
funny if it didn't hurt so much.....
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Date: 8/2/2011 2:42:00 PM
best of luck in the contest with this wonderful tail rhyme and thanks so much for your comments on my poetry~~
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Date: 8/2/2011 2:33:00 PM
good luck in the contest with this sure winner cory
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Date: 8/2/2011 2:22:00 PM
Well done Sara. Good luck on the contest.
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Date: 8/2/2011 1:49:00 PM
Thanks for the entry
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Date: 8/2/2011 1:23:00 PM
Left me with a smile Sara! Thanks for sharing! Steve
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