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High on tiptoes, fingertips reach for unknown eternity No existence no seen reality nothing coherent Tendrils of tight knit gold lash out seeking Connection, link to fingers outstretched Music only heard inside mysteriously connect strands of consciousness Unawares of surroundings Little boy, little girl Dance, dance *** December 22, 2016

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Date: 12/24/2016 3:26:00 PM
Lovely descriptive poem, Darren. And also wanted to say a big Merry Christmas to you as I go off here for the day (but probably I'll come back this evening. I always do. haha)
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Darren White
Date: 12/24/2016 10:49:00 PM
Merry Christmas, Andrea :)
Date: 12/22/2016 8:27:00 PM
Such a sweet thing, this lack of worry, just enjoying themselves - love it <3
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Darren White
Date: 12/22/2016 11:37:00 PM
Yeah, this was inspired by a poem/song of Mark (here below) but I had my little niece in mind)
Date: 12/22/2016 4:53:00 AM
beautiful strains from fingers towards infinity ... a very good creativity ...
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Darren White
Date: 12/22/2016 6:06:00 AM
Thank you so much :)

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