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Story of Love Ending

STORY OF LOVE ENDING Love can be a sad story Because of its bad endings As everything will be history Only discussing up past happy beginnings Love is sometimes difficult Because of that unbearable left cut That needs serious mending As a results of surprised ending Sometimes when love ends is like a boat sinking Because of too much deep thinking And where you will feel like a fool As everything seems right but not cool Unexpected love endings needs love insurance As a guarantee for love assurance So that one can be sure That indeed I am insured When love ends, we are left heart broken As we cannot cope with the echoes of word spoken As everything slowly and slowly dies because of lies But we will give hope to ourselves that we are not the first As it has been there and always exist Yes that the story of ending love Where your heart will feel that empty hole Feeling like you are bitten by a shark Because they will be no that love spark But all working together for peace Piece by piece.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/23/2015 12:11:00 AM
Tshambane, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage. **SKAT**
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Tshambane Otlaathusa
Date: 8/24/2015 5:13:00 AM
Skat A thanks a lot my dear, i appreciate your comment my sister.
Date: 8/12/2015 12:18:00 AM
T O.,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Tshambane Otlaathusa
Date: 8/12/2015 2:42:00 AM
THANK YOU VERY MUCH MY NEW POET FRIEND.. I REALLY APPRECIATE YOUR COMMENT, HELP ME GROW MY FRIEND.
Date: 8/11/2015 10:45:00 AM
TSHAMBANE OTLAATHUSA, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Tshambane Otlaathusa
Date: 8/12/2015 2:42:00 AM
THANK YOU VERY MUCH MY NEW POET FRIEND.. I REALLY APPRECIATE YOUR COMMENT, HELP ME GROW MY FRIEND

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