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Stormy Whether

Only the unfinished moon pierced the gray haze, not a star shown in the mist muffled sky above. The ashen air was thick with the portents, dismayed ... death blanketed firmament, the diadem above. From the south the fierce winds came, their might at bay, from the north the cold winds came, snow fell above, and only the unfinished moon spoke of doom, as the mother of all storms arose and bloomed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/28/2012 12:19:00 PM
Debbie; I like your poem, but I don't like this kind of weather. It has been kind of cool here in Texas for the past two days. It don't look good for the people by the East coast. Have a great day. Lucilla
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Date: 10/28/2012 9:21:00 AM
And your pen buffeted....but steady...nice...jim
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Date: 10/28/2012 7:16:00 AM
Its heading my way by tonight and Monday into Tuesday... Looks like a Big One!! Hope your well Debbie.... hugs n luv Michael
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Date: 10/28/2012 6:22:00 AM
Hope the storm goes gently back where it came from. - Be careful! Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / huggs .... Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/28/2012 3:43:00 AM
wow, move over the english classic period, and read this little wonder.. need i say more?
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Date: 10/28/2012 1:00:00 AM
A scary portrayal of Doom. I liked it the lot, lot of imagery.
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Date: 10/27/2012 9:01:00 PM
Only you could make Frankenstorm sound like art... what a unstill life you've painted! hugs, Dee
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Date: 10/27/2012 7:20:00 PM
* Reminds Myself Of That Movie, 'The Day After Tomorrow,' Sweet Beautiful Amazing Debbie. Definitely Sounds As Though The Ingrediants And Makings For Quite A Devestating Storm. Ever These Truths Found Amid This Excellently Presented And Wonderful Gray Moon's Verse: The Power In Words. Joy As Always To Behold You Again. My Love, Rachel *
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