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Stormy Waters

I love to be me and that's a good sign, When the wind is flying with this heart of mine; It taps at the window with cold mournful chill, Chasing the leaves that dance down the hill. The sky’s dark and cloudy, the sea's white with foam, And seagulls are screaming as they fly back home; The boat’s wild tossing as she flies in the gale, Rises on the waves as the wind fills her sail. I'm just a woman trapped here on shore, A soul that is longing for each breaker's roar; The heart beats restless with the winds that blow, Where ever she flies is where I want to go. The gulls fly the heavens far beyond shore, Winging the skies with clouds evermore; Fly with the tempest a gypsy heart true, There's joy in the peril as you fly in the blue. The oceans that thunder lift dark waves to pray, And tempests that shriek take the breath away; The foam that flies will cover the land, And take the small footprint out of the sand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/10/2012 3:46:00 PM
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Date: 5/10/2012 2:17:00 PM
'...longing for each breaker's roar,' '...fly with the tempest a gypsy heart true,' '...there's joy in the peril as you fly,' poignant yet passionate phrasing. Well done, Elizabeth. Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 9/11/2011 8:53:00 PM
Yes it will, but for only a three and a half year period. Then our Lord will set His feet upon the sands of Israel once more to usher in the thousand year rein of peace. Halleluiah! You have two soup mails:)
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Date: 9/8/2011 7:44:00 PM
Cinema imagery in this one elizabeth. Got lost in it. Loved it! CR
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Date: 8/17/2011 7:20:00 AM
A pleasure reading your wonderful poetry today. The imagery of it is wonderful.
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Date: 8/15/2011 11:21:00 PM
Woderfully written Liz. Your style of write is easily read and always good reads. "Stormy Waters" another skillful one.
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Date: 8/15/2011 3:12:00 PM
Awesome imagery here, my friend
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Date: 8/15/2011 1:09:00 AM
Another great write, Elizabeth.. How are you? Me i'm just stopping by to say hi and catch up on some of my reading. Love the meaning one can give another when it comes to reading poetry. Have yourself a wonderful evening. God bless & take care,..Linda
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Date: 8/14/2011 9:18:00 PM
quite a bit of imagery here, Lizzy, certainly catches the minds eye....and no, I haven't seen any more armadillos, though there were signs of them in the pasture yesterday
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Date: 8/14/2011 9:13:00 PM
well done Elizabeth. Flows very nicely and is graphic with imagery. It reminded me of when Christ calmed the tempest at sea. All of nature at his command and we a part of it
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Date: 8/14/2011 4:09:00 PM
The poetess continues through storms of distress. The music is playing to the beat of her dress. She dances in ribbons of image and rhyme. The oceans may dry up, but some other time.
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Date: 8/14/2011 2:18:00 PM
another wonderful poem Elizaeth, lovely imagery as always, Excellent write,it comes so easy to you, always a star. steven
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Date: 8/14/2011 12:58:00 PM
hi Elizabeth :) This is another one of your writes that just flows so well, you definitely are wonderful with rhymes and the imagery and metaphors here are really beautiful-- your last stanza is truly memorable-- keep on writing! and thank you as well for always dropping by my poems, you bring smiles whenever I read your encouraging words :D
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Date: 8/14/2011 7:58:00 AM
Atmospheric, wistful and poetic. Good imagery and good turn of phrase throughout. Well done Liz! xoxo Robert.
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Date: 8/13/2011 10:38:00 PM
Very nice metaphoric poem Elizabeth...liked it.
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Date: 8/13/2011 6:42:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “I Love The Depth of This Muse Brushed Once More Within Masterful Colours My Dear Precious & Lovely Elizabeth! = And Although I The Connection Unto The Longing Gypsy Spirit I Would Believe Within Many of Us Here In This Place Along Times Corridores == To Be Chained By Any Shadows Is Something That for Myself *^_^* Became A Distant & Forgotten Memory, Long Ago Now *^_#* I Walk Beyound This World, This Life & Its Mirages Walls of Lies & Thus Thorns! *^_^* Excellent Verse My Dear!” === My Love Unto You Always & Forever, Jasper *
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Date: 8/13/2011 6:20:00 PM
That heart of yours must be up to something if it's longing for a storm. Careful; lotta rocks out there.
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Date: 8/13/2011 5:57:00 PM
Wonderful write lovely Lady...with love...old Jack
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Date: 8/13/2011 4:30:00 PM
I love this amazing write, Elizabeth. Awesome imagery
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Date: 8/13/2011 3:37:00 PM
Wow Elizabeth, you have painted a great moment in your poem! I really enjoyed your illustrious write! I've been loving your poetry that you have been writing!! Keep it up!!
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Date: 8/13/2011 3:33:00 PM
The tide's are changing and so are we! I was in the Coast Guard, yes, I do love the sea. I do love the moon light flares and all of the species of bird's lying there..the ocean can be so intoxicating. Nice of you to know how to get intouch with those sentiments'. Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS P.S.; GOOD WORK-UP!
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Date: 8/13/2011 3:32:00 PM
The tide's are changing and so are we! I was in the Coast Guard, yes, I do love the sea. I do love the moon light flares and all of the species of bird's lying there..the ocean can be so intoxicating. Nice of you to know how to get intouch with those sentiments'. Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS P.S.; GOOD WORK-UP!
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Date: 8/13/2011 1:35:00 PM
The mood and tone of this astonishing piece is set with the first two lines in a beautiful dancing rhyme expanding into melodic atmospheric stanzas. I must say Elizabeth, this is one of my favorites! Magnificent write!
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Date: 8/13/2011 12:31:00 PM
Its great too feel at one with the earth as you describe so well here. Carol x
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Date: 8/13/2011 12:10:00 PM
always so amazing elizabeth are your creations in poetry.. the vast imagery so grand and the intricate details of each verse are phenomenal luv.. very entertaining piece ..of poetic art..
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