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Fierce wind fans aghast! energy release Somber clouds aggregate longing deep cry. . . Rocket to train slam-bang sounds reign the skies! Acid bitter sky tears aged litter wry! Boogie titanic waves contest to flee! Lightning rocks like disco lights vivid trance! Giving birth to fearsome galore of storm. . . Minutes to hours brisk growing heavens' arms; Strongly ravaging placing things to harm Elevating flood seeping so expanse. . . Fascination gone, as groans and moans dawn ~ The storm brought death and stormy crashing thoughts, On humans and non-humans failing trot. They all tried to hold, tried harder and fought. . . Sun shines lightening the skies, hope steps on! (c) OLive ELoisa 6:27pm June 28, 2014 CONTEST: STORMS SPONSOR: SHADOW HAMILTON placed 2nd.. to God be the greatest glory.. :D!

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John Posey

Date: 9/18/2014 10:38:00 PM

I feel weakened after reading this superbly crafted post.... much like the aftermath of a great storm. Real thanksgiving follows with the realization that you have survived ..... Great writing here..... Love Ya..... Jake

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/19/2014 12:55:00 AM

Thanks much John.. I appreciate your visit..:) yes always always me must be hopeful..:)

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/7/2014 12:51:00 PM

Congrats on a great win, Olive!!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 7:15:00 AM

Thanks Arlene..:)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/3/2014 11:12:00 AM

Wow Olive ! Such a beautiful write it is ,, exceptional work ! Congrats on huge win !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/5/2014 6:13:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Upma :) these comments are so generous and that these are added as my inspirations... :)

James Fraser

Date: 7/2/2014 3:11:00 PM

I mirror my previous comment. This is a wonderful poem Olive, and deservedly, it's heading to my favourites. Mega congratulations on your win, and I'm glad it did, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 6:11:00 PM

Thank you James for putting it as your fave.. :) Im flattered.. :) and your comments are so generous.. :D thanks :)

Roy Jerden

Date: 7/2/2014 9:21:00 AM

Well done! Congratulations!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 5:56:00 PM

Thank you ROy for the drop by.. :D

Paul Callus

Date: 7/2/2014 5:35:00 AM

Congratulations! Olive_eloi! :) I had no doubt this would be high up on the winners' list. Keep on flying! You merit a candle-lit dinner for this:) What about Paris?:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 6:53:00 AM

hahaha :D Paul PAul Paul... :D Paris :O weeeee i hope i can :O but maybe for now I'll settle for cooking for a group of people this friday.. :D as thanksgiving for all the blessings :D

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/2/2014 5:08:00 AM

This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 6:12:00 PM

Thank you Sara.. :) God bless you.. :)

Mohan Chutani

Date: 7/2/2014 12:14:00 AM

hope steps on, after the storm. Congrats Olive, for the fine win. Mohan

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 6:13:00 PM

Thank you MOhan.. :) God bless you.. :D

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/1/2014 7:58:00 PM

oh coolness girl, you and your fancy poetry have created another beautiful winner. Well done girl Happy hugs :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 6:15:00 PM

Thank you CAsarah.. :D God bless you sweets :D hugs

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/1/2014 7:42:00 PM

Hi Olive, congratulations on another well-deserved win! Warmest regards!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 6:16:00 PM

Thank you Pandita.. :D God bless you.. :D

Jadazzle United

Date: 7/1/2014 6:25:00 PM

amazing imagery a well deserved winner Olive. hugs Jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 4:18:00 AM

Thank you ?Jan..:)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/1/2014 6:09:00 PM

wonderful rendition Olive congrats on 2nd place hugs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 4:18:00 AM

Thank you Shadow..:) GBU

Justin Bordner

Date: 7/1/2014 6:00:00 PM

your word pairings are astonishingly novel, a descriptive poetry that really allows the reader to construct the scene, and intent for themselves by using the emotional setting you provide Olive. There is a genius quality to this write. " Somber clouds aggregate longing deep cry...Giving birth to fearsome galore of storm..." This is what creative writing is about. J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 4:17:00 AM

Thank you Justing for the generous remarks...:) GBU

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/1/2014 10:58:00 AM

Reads like winning material to me..Way to go for the contest..That is, I guess that it is for one of the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Glad that you got a chuckle..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 4:15:00 AM

Thank you Sara..:) I enjoyed every stop I make to your page..:) GBU

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/1/2014 8:30:00 AM

I read the bold parts as a single poem. This is like two poems in one, very well done!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/1/2014 11:35:00 AM

:)thank you Richard.. :) you have observed that :) and yes I did it purposely. :) thanks much. :D God bless you . i read yours and its great too.. :)

James Fraser

Date: 6/30/2014 3:05:00 PM

One word, Wonderful. A poem that has to be read 4 or 5 times as every time it's read, the storm gets stormier and stormier, knowing that tranquility and hope abounds at the end. Good luck in the contest Olive, this Wonderful poem deserves recognition, smiles, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/1/2014 7:39:00 AM

Thank you James for the drop by.. :) God bless you :)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/28/2014 6:09:00 PM

Sounds and images galore making your storm full of life! Very powerfully expressed. Well done Olive_eloi :) // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 6/29/2014 6:24:00 AM

there's one rebellious exclamation mark somewhere!:)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/29/2014 6:14:00 AM

thank you :D!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/29/2014 6:13:00 AM

yes it must be full of life PAul.. :) as no matter what storm that will pass always and always we must remember that there's hope.. :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/29/2014 6:13:00 AM

thanks :)

Silverla Stmichael

Date: 6/28/2014 1:42:00 PM

Love storms and they are powerfully captured here.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/29/2014 6:12:00 AM

Thank you dear.. :) God bless you.. :)

Tim Smith

Date: 6/28/2014 1:15:00 PM

A powerful storm but it passes like most things in life...wonderful... Hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/29/2014 6:11:00 AM

Thanks Tim.. :) It's true its passes like most things in life however the damage it leaves some passed and some will remain... thus always we must remain hopeful.. :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/29/2014 6:11:00 AM

Thank you Tim.. :) weee simple me always.. :D

Tim Smith
Date: 6/28/2014 11:34:00 PM

You look stunning in your new avatar

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2014 1:03:00 PM

I love how you ended with the positive note of sun shining in the skies again. Storms are terrible things and it is very sad that so many lives are lost because of them. Try that triolet!!! WOuld love to see you do one.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/29/2014 6:09:00 AM

Yes Andrea I tried it :D!!! weeee.. Thank you Andrea.. :) I want to emphasized that in every storm that comes; climate and well problems: there's always a new day and along with this is new hopes and new dreams... :)