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Below is the poem entitled Storming which was written by poet Dana Smith. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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She's reckless and a constant change, Her ways have gone from calm to ill; A love so pure does she exchange But waves a warm embrace turn chill. Could you awake to morning grey, Or bright sunshine in the night A storm that brews in early day- Or an impulse shed by late moonlight? Could you let her in your heart that's sure, In your mind of ready thought? Could you invite her sure uncertainty And the frustration that she's brought? Could you let me in when I'm a mess, My sharp tongue, but gentle touch? Will my love alone suffice, Or am I just too much?

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  1. Date: 7/29/2012 11:56:00 PM
    This is an awesome write...really enjoyed this one!!!! Regards INK-U-SCRIPT

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 10:33:00 PM
    Wow, beautifully written - JH

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 11:43:00 AM
    Happy weekend to you Dana'lynn. I enjoyed reading your outstanding poetry this morning. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 9:59:00 PM
    What a fabulous and enlightening write! You write with such power Dana'lynn, I was in awe of your poem! I really enjoyed your piece of art you have written! Great Work!!