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Storm Surprise

Storm Surprise Desert never felt a wet time in its history It had to drink up sun light in the days And stand solid with the sand to pass the night No complaints were registered when the rains came To shock the dunes alive They rolled along with floods and lightning Lizards blinked, so many pounding drops unthinkable That never seemed to stop Legs waved like leaves then spun away Rocks showed their heads then sunk Winds carried on like drunken sailors The quiet desert became a circus of whirlpools Buried in water rings Blending into what was silence It still held on to tons of sand But would never be the same again Dry land was just a memory Rain saw to that Created on 2/28/15 Pick A Subject – Poetry Contest sponsored by Shadow Hamilton The subject is "Storm"

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Date: 3/8/2015 1:18:00 PM
Earl, thank you for the wonderful reply...LINDA
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Date: 3/6/2015 4:41:00 AM
I love the first five lines best.. :) vivid imagery yet the delivery is so soft..even how the rocks head sunk.. and the drunken sailors.. I see it like in cartoons.. :)! Kudos EArl!.. :D!//olive eloisa
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Date: 3/6/2015 6:23:00 AM
Good morning Olive, Thank you so much for your kind words and comments. I appreciate it. This poem was all about creating images and bringing a dry calm landscape into a wet one using some dramatic forces of nature. Have a wonderful day. Take care. Earl
Date: 3/6/2015 2:54:00 AM
Earl, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/6/2015 6:28:00 AM
Good morning Linda, Thank you for stopping by with your encouraging comment. I hope that things are good with you. I hope you have a pleasant day. Take care. Earl
Date: 3/5/2015 6:12:00 PM
Dropping by to congratulate you, Earl! :D Kim
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Date: 3/6/2015 6:32:00 AM
Good morning Kim, Thank you so much. It is good to hear from you again. I hope you have a wonderful week end. Take care. Earl
Date: 3/5/2015 11:56:00 AM
Such powerful imagery - many congrats Earl:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/5/2015 2:26:00 PM
Hi Jan, Thanks. Storms need a force of nature behind them to make it work. Energy and power to wake up the sleeping calm of desert. I wanted the desert to drink up the storm since it had never experienced water before and had been thirsty forever. Glad you liked it. Take care. Earl
Date: 3/5/2015 7:29:00 AM
Earl, congratulations on your nice win for your storm poem. I really liked where you went with this theme! Sandra
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Date: 3/5/2015 8:18:00 AM
Hi Sandra. Thank you so much. I enjoyed your entry in this contest as well. Congratulations to you too on your win. Take care. Earl
Date: 3/5/2015 6:52:00 AM
very good take on subject Earl congrats on placing 3rd hugs
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Date: 3/5/2015 8:20:00 AM
Hi Shadow. Thank you. I appreciate it. I'm glad you liked it. Have a great day. Earl
Date: 2/28/2015 10:28:00 AM
Powerful imagery. Engaging read from start to finish! :D Kim
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Date: 2/28/2015 3:28:00 PM
Hi Kim, I'm glad you found some merit in my work. I appreciate your comments. Have a great day. Earl
Date: 2/28/2015 1:04:00 AM
You have a way with imagery. Your poems are always a pleasure to read, #7
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Date: 2/28/2015 9:10:00 AM
Hi Njeri, Thank you so much. Poetry should be fun. It should be entertaining. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Have a great day. Take care. Earl

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