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Storm Master

Passive in passion, taking in the sweet scent of the bloom Milks the serenity of an environment, within nature Rides the ferocious wind that formats the raging ocean © Harry J Horsman 2010

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 12/23/2018 3:18:00 AM

PASSIVE IN PASSION- wonderful thought

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2013 11:08:00 PM

And another one I had not seen in a while. Sure hoping for a new one from you. It's so good to see new posts from you, my friend.

Date: 6/9/2010 9:53:00 AM

What an interesting perspective in this poem. I really like the last line. Could even be the start of a new poem. Just a thought. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2010 8:47:00 PM

INteresting description, Harry. It takes a calm storm master to ride the ferocious wind! Luv, andrea

Tirzah Conway

Date: 6/8/2010 1:27:00 PM

I really enjoyed reading this-Very Cool ~Tirzah~

Date: 6/8/2010 12:43:00 PM

I like your writings sir. Very nice. Scarlett

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/8/2010 6:48:00 AM

Passive in passion nice alliteration - great images

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/8/2010 6:06:00 AM

Very imagenary write, enjuyed reading it, Harry! And thank you for your congrats on my win...Gert

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/8/2010 4:52:00 AM

Great descriptive and emotive write that you have penned in this one...This one is close to home and touches me...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2010 2:51:00 AM

Like a hurricane gone bad, sweet ness till it hit the ocean panics. Enjoyed, have awovderful onf,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/8/2010 2:16:00 AM

Very creative, Harry. If you truly are a "storm master," I hope you'll keep oil from being spread by hurricanes this season. Quite an engaging sijo! Love, Carolyn