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Storm Clouds

Storm clouds are calling from skies gloomy gray Drenching the thoughts that are falling today Chilly endeavors along puddled themes Trying their hardest to dampen our dreams Darkness to wander before every sight Bringing the sadness that flows in the night Yet there are waiting beyond shadowed hills Harmonic breezes and melodic chills Crescent moon choirs to sing us to sleep Drying our tears so we no longer weep Then we will wake slowly open our eyes Wearing our smiles beneath blue autumn skies

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Date: 12/1/2021 7:17:00 PM
So well written Chris, you were truly missed, glad you're posting again, this is a melancholy write but hopeful at the end. Enjoyed, hope you are doing well!
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Date: 11/19/2021 8:28:00 AM
Beautiful! I love it. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 11/16/2021 8:27:00 AM
Hi Chris. I see your imagery is just as cleverly written as ever. Very lovely write. I hope you've been well.
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Date: 11/10/2021 3:06:00 PM
You've got me anticipating those "harmonic breezes and melodic chills' ... not a cold-weather guy, but as long as the chills are 'melodic,' I'll go along to get along. Enjoyed the seasonal drama, Chris. Take good care and keeps smiling, Gershon
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Date: 11/6/2021 2:43:00 PM
I love the flow of this and the uplifting end.
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Date: 11/4/2021 12:21:00 AM
Beautiful poetry, Chris, love the positive ending:) could relate to this one:)
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Date: 11/3/2021 5:53:00 PM
So true Chris and I love the hopeful, positive ending! Well written. So smooth. Take care, my friend :)
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Date: 11/3/2021 3:31:00 PM
Such a musical and hopeful write—a lullaby. Especially loved the “crescent moons choirs.” :)
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