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Storm

A blinding flash across the sky, As thunder follows,one by one Dark fenzied cloudbursts quickly cry . Cool winds that started with a sigh, Now shriek and howl, their leash undone A blinding flash across the sky , Crestfallen trees prepare to die, The wrath of nature has begun. Dark frenzied cloudbursts quickly cry, Creating rain that will ally, Cascading floods to overun. A blinding flash across the sky, The storm now raging, hell is nigh. High winds destroying as they run. Dark frenzied cloudbursts quickly cry, Their tears now hail in blizzards eye. As dawn arrives, the rising sun Burns off the mist across the sky. Dark clouds have passed,the soft winds cry. 2/ 27/ 2015

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Date: 3/8/2015 5:08:00 AM
George, you are welcome. thank you for the reply
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Date: 3/9/2015 5:52:00 PM
It's so good when you can rely on true friends Linda.Cheers George.
Date: 3/6/2015 2:54:00 AM
George, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/7/2015 5:34:00 PM
Hi Linda, thanks for alerting me ,and your congratulations. I have had a busy time these last few days and did not realise this competition placings had been announced.Thanks once again.George
Date: 3/5/2015 7:39:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats George:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/5/2015 6:39:00 AM
a great villanelle with perfect rhyme and super flow George you hit the nail right on the head congrats on 2nd place hugs
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George Seal
Date: 3/9/2015 9:37:00 AM
Hi Shadow, thankyou for your wonderful comments. Hitting the nail on the head in reallity is easy for me .I am a carpenter by trade. How ever did you know.Cheers George.
Date: 2/27/2015 6:16:00 PM
wonderful imagery - good luck in the contest - i have never tried this form - the repeated lines are very effective:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 3/3/2015 8:32:00 AM
Jan. I'm British by birth English by the grace of God Yorkshire by a divine intervention and i was born in Leeds by pure luck. Just my little joke but so true. George.
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2015 9:10:00 AM
Oh we sure know how to moan about it lol - where are you - I am in the Isle of Man:-) Hugs jan xx
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George Seal
Date: 3/1/2015 8:51:00 AM
Thanks Jan, good old British weather hey, gives one plenty to write about. After all it's our National everyday topic.George.

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