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Storm

pavillions of gray camp across the sky waving banners of rain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/1/2015 10:16:00 AM
I'm intrigued by the three haiku I've read of yours so far, Janet. This one is my favorite. Well painted.... LINDA
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Janet Boebert
Date: 2/3/2015 7:05:00 PM
Thank you, Linda -- I like the rhythm of haiku. I try to do the form justice.
Date: 1/30/2015 4:17:00 PM
Janet YOUR story is stormy gray and great.
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Janet Boebert
Date: 1/31/2015 2:04:00 PM
I hope my story isn't too gray or stormy - although it certainly has been in the past. I DO have a liking for storms and rain, though.
Date: 1/30/2015 3:11:00 PM
I love a good storm . . . rain washes the air clean . . . let the curtain down. Good visualation.
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Janet Boebert
Date: 1/31/2015 2:06:00 PM
Yes, yes, and yes. You are an astute reader!

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