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Theme: Loss

I sing a song of midnight pain For we will not embrace again Although the sky grows blue and clear Within my heart a storm is near You dear darling To heaven soar What we did have it is no more.

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/19/2024 3:02:00 AM

I like the image of sending to heaven…it allows for closure and is a helpful hint on how to think about this loss for some of our obsessed individuals….been there.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/20/2024 12:59:00 PM

Thanks Duke. An apt response.

Valsa George

Date: 1/18/2024 6:10:00 AM

The pangs of separation is magnificently brought here. A touching sweet poem.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/18/2024 6:12:00 AM

Thanks Valsa.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2024 4:16:00 PM

Love this. Soupmail

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/16/2024 4:34:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I didn’t get a soupmail.

Ink Empress

Date: 1/16/2024 8:41:00 AM

Evocative and poignant but has a catchy cadence to your very well flowing lines dear richard. I loved the last two stanzas the most, so moving! And you rhyme just effortlessly! Ensuring your lines flow with each other seamlessly! Pleasure always reading your poems

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/16/2024 4:34:00 PM

Thanks so much, I appreciate your artistry as well.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/15/2024 4:20:00 PM

A sad poem that is well sequenced. Thank you.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/16/2024 4:59:00 AM

Thanks Hilda.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/15/2024 4:16:00 PM

I loved the soft way you described loss...simple but well put together lines said with tenderness...almost made me teary-eyed. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/16/2024 4:59:00 AM

With only three stanzas one has to be succinct. I’m pleased my message is clear. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Bill Baker

Date: 1/15/2024 4:05:00 PM

Nice rhythm to this fine entry for the contest, Rick. Good luck! This ties in well with your last poem. I enjoyed reading them both, my friend. Have a great 2024! Bill

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/16/2024 4:57:00 AM

Thanks so much Bill. Blessings to you as well.

Silent One

Date: 1/15/2024 10:11:00 AM

Nice rhymes and flow Richard..

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2024 12:47:00 PM

A simple one. Thanks.