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Stop the Ride

It started off as fun, and games... Who knew fun could turn into terrifying in a matter of seconds ? I scream until my lungs are raw, and unbearably painful . STOP ! Over, and over until I'm tired of hearing the sound of my own voice . The world spins faster, and faster as the ride continues... I wan't off . I want it to be over . I'm dizzy , and weak . My legs tremble with fear , my heart beats with adrenaline . Just stop the ride . Stop the ride .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/25/2016 1:04:00 AM
NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN, JAYDEN. SKAT
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Date: 6/12/2014 5:21:00 PM
Jayden, well done, i like the dizzy spell, you were under. Amazing write,...~SKAT~
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Jayden Jackson
Date: 6/16/2014 10:37:00 PM
thank you SKAT ! :)
Date: 6/10/2014 9:51:00 AM
I can relate to this when I was younger riding rides at Astro World which no longer exist. Love how you captured the reader in the beginning to the end..Excellent write Jayden.
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Jayden Jackson
Date: 6/10/2014 11:53:00 PM
Thank you ! I'm glad you can relate to my piece !

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