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Stop It Brain

If you talk too much my head very well may explode; for fear you will not stop. I will think too much, my brain full of selfish thoughts. Moth on the wall; you never fall. You taunt the souls that occupy the earth. Stalking the journeys that every human, every species, every biotic being will take. Flower in the ground; you cannot end your life. you fill people with sweet aromas with your presence. you have a full life to lead, why waste such a thing? Girl of the past; you have branded me with feelings i will never throw away.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2014 4:37:00 PM

Hello March, Congratulations, I'm scoping and enjoying the new featured poems for this week. :) It was nice to see your poem on the poetry soups, home page. Have a fun week. Always & Forever *LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/17/2014 5:21:00 AM

A well penned poem, enjoyed it. Congrats on the poem being featured this week, march

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2014 3:30:00 PM

March, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/3/2014 1:06:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,March :) - I choose your first great written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/3/2014 11:00:00 AM

Welcome to this site. I know you will like it here. You have included the incorrect homophone in your first and second lines: "to much" should be presented as "too much". Everything else looks good.

Skat A

Date: 3/3/2014 10:07:00 AM

March, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

March Leebird
Date: 3/3/2014 10:17:00 AM

thank you, i am new to poetry but im slowly but surely falling in love with it :~)