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You know those people you hate for their looks? Well here's something to put in your books... We're all made the same below the surface. We've all got dreams, and visions, and purpose. We're fighting about what flag we can wave. Just another excuse to misbehave. At the end of the day, you've got one life. Why would you want to fill it with strife? Love for our families, and blood in our veins. You'd better get that hate by the reins. All birthed from a mother, and we're all going to die. Are you prepared to answer the Guy in the sky?

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Michael Hatter

Date: 9/5/2015 7:41:00 AM

Well said!

Kl Williams
Date: 9/5/2015 9:03:00 PM

Thank you Michael! :)

Nyonglema Pisoh

Date: 9/4/2015 5:49:00 AM

Hi Katie, Oh so sweet it made me smile. Keep writing...I like your natural style!

Kl Williams
Date: 9/4/2015 10:13:00 AM

Thank you! :)

Skat A

Date: 6/26/2015 3:20:00 PM

Katie, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Kl Williams
Date: 6/26/2015 4:46:00 PM

Thank you!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/26/2015 2:51:00 PM

Katie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Kl Williams
Date: 6/26/2015 4:47:00 PM

Thank you!

Cortney Bartholomew

Date: 6/26/2015 8:51:00 AM

Awesome write! :)

Kl Williams
Date: 6/26/2015 4:46:00 PM

Thank you! :)