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Stonehenge

See shadows gently turning Through countless nights and ceaseless days Till once again returning A blue and grey concentric maze Enduring through the ages Through countless nights and ceaseless days Those now forgotten sages Envisioned stones that still live on Enduring through the ages Though nations came, and now are gone The men who stopped and pondered Envisioned stones that still live on Now only time has honoured The days and seasons marked in time The men who stopped and pondered The moon and sun these sarcens climb See shadows gently turning The days and seasons marked in time Till once again returning

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Donna Jones

Date: 5/2/2013 4:34:00 PM

Congratulations Isaiah

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/2/2013 3:42:00 PM

I really like this one..Great thoughtful work that you have penned in this winning work..Congrats..Sara

Heather Ober

Date: 4/29/2013 9:17:00 AM

Congrats, Isaiah :) Very well deserved win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2013 9:30:00 PM

Isaiah, thank you for the wonderful poem and stunning imagery in my "7 wonders of the world contest." CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for the support. Take Care & Good Night ;-) ~LINDA

Jeremy Martin

Date: 4/26/2013 8:26:00 PM

Lovely, artistic images and beautiful rhyming. Congratulations

Skat A

Date: 4/26/2013 8:18:00 PM

Isaiah, congrats with your 7 wonder poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 4/26/2013 6:56:00 PM

Wonderful poem Isaiah, truly captures Stonehenge, congratulaions

Donna Jones

Date: 4/26/2013 12:48:00 PM

Awesome Isaiah...congratulations

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/26/2013 4:50:00 AM

Congrats on your deserving win~A.O

Richard D Seal

Date: 4/15/2013 4:39:00 PM

WOW. I love this. Have been there. passed it many times also whilst in the back of a truck, is a certain place as you move along that it appears to rise out of the ground, absolutely awesome. Thanks for this memory Isaiah. Great write. Take care, Richard

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/3/2013 9:06:00 AM

I visited stonehenge..It was an outstanding experience..This poem describes the enchantment in shadows greatly.You manage to write about any topic.By the way if you ever visit stonehenge..fly 3hrs awsy to my island and visit the Neolitic temples..even older than stonehenge..deal!!:-$ B-)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/3/2013 9:04:00 AM

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/2/2013 6:33:00 PM

It is an amazing and mysterious place. I love your spin on this one!! Nicely done, Isaiah!

Heather Ober

Date: 4/2/2013 11:07:00 AM

AWESOME! I was lucky enough to visit Stonehenge last year and you have captured its magic and mystery perfectly. Terzanelle is one of my fave forms and you nailed it.