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Stonefaced

STONEFACED facets of fear stoneswept windfaced as we stepped into murky darkening grey recalling that day you began to fade away... like vapour into a mental decline surrealistic and sublime tangible terror overflowed lunacy replaced sanity as you voiced your mind…. bold angels trapped in blocks of ice labyrinths tangled in whirlwinds slice insidious moons after sulphurous noons innocent beasts speaking fluent glib leaving headspace blindfolded deafdumb and corroded visiting that ravaged place stonefaced © Kim van Breda—13 October 2015

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Date: 10/14/2015 9:09:00 PM
visually awesome, verse terrifying.., jill
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Date: 10/14/2015 5:36:00 PM
Your technique at blending words is brilliant. You take vocabulary to a whole new level. :)
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