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Stone Pathway

A stone pathway up Carries some colorful leaves The steps are narrow And the stones has moss on them Pleasant Autumn scene displayed
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/16/2012 7:10:00 PM
This reads like a good description of the house where I grew up in New Jersey. Good tanka as usual.
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Date: 9/16/2012 7:01:00 PM
Russell, such a peaceful scene you have painted with your tanka. I love the moss on the stones.-, it gives an ancient feeling.
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