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Stone Cold

Stone cold His stone cold heart beats, and sends tears roll down my cheeks, Myriad days pass, twilight reflects in the eyes, Wonder if I still exist ? Tanka- 5/7/5/7/7 Written March 24th, 2015 For contest "Tanka 3" by Andrea

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Tonytocaa Camacho

Date: 4/4/2015 8:38:00 PM

Love the line,Myraid days pass,enjoyable read,happy Easter Upma,thanks tonytocaa

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/26/2015 4:55:00 AM

Dr. Upma, this a tragic verse.. sad.. GL in the contest. :)!//olive eloisa

Kim Shaw

Date: 3/24/2015 8:03:00 PM

Heartfelt emotion. Very moving. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Kimberly

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/24/2015 1:45:00 PM

the pensive touch of this tanks moves me, dr. upma.. very fine ofeering.. huggs

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/24/2015 8:33:00 AM

Good luck in the contest dear Upma! This should do well! Hugs, Jack xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/24/2015 8:49:00 AM

Thnx Jack! Appreciate ur kind visit !

Jan Allison

Date: 3/24/2015 7:42:00 AM

deep and sad tanka - good luck with the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/24/2015 8:50:00 AM

Thnx Jan! Appreciate ur constant support!