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Stone Cold

Stone cold Had you been Kind to me, And not given A cold shoulder, Would I be blind To your concern ? That harshness and inhuman attitude, Took away my soul, A transformed stone, Forced to live, With no emotions, Now showing a heart, And ropes of love Traverse across, Hardly leave a mark On my existence, I am stone cold! Written September 26th, 2014 For contest 'Free verse poem' by Regina riddle Awarded HM

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/26/2014 10:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning poem and thank you so much for entering. I posted a blog on the winning poems under Free Verse Contest if you have time to visit, please do. Thank you again. Love and prayers and God bless you all your days, Love, Gina

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/26/2014 7:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your HM Dr. Sharma.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/26/2014 7:03:00 PM

That's too sad, I hope it's only imagining! Light & love

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2014 6:25:00 PM

congrats on your HM Dr Sharma:-) hugs jan xxx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/26/2014 1:57:00 PM

Interesting way to go for the contest..Unique theme..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/26/2014 1:04:00 PM

powerful piece of writing bless you

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2014 10:03:00 AM

ooh I found this chilling Dr Sharma - the title is also from a book by Robert Swindells that our students study at school - ohh feel chilled to the bone now:-( Good luck in the contest. hugs jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2014 10:19:00 AM

I am sure there are many many poems with names of books etc I love the title you have chosen it is so right for the poem:-) Hugs jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/26/2014 10:16:00 AM

Oh thanks! I dont know about that book! Do I need to change it ?