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Stone and Marshmallow Castles

Brick upon each brick I build As I stack heavy stones one by one Sweat and tears, love and fears To create an earthly castle under the sun. Damages by hurtful weather come, Ravages against a fortress that was strong With scrapped knees and promised pleas, I feel defeated, do you hear my song My sweet so sweet, little girl With marshmallows, I will form A castle complete, where we can meet I wish to protect you from the storm Like a father, you take my hand Guiding me to our castle in the sky No longer bound, to earth by stone The world less daunting from on high Look at the earth far down below Above we're illuminated by the sun The best part is your princess smile You open the drawbridge for everyone With open arms you greet each child Joy everlasting awaits each one Within this castle, where the angels meet, Built with love and warmed by the sun A collaboration with Casarah Nance. Thanks for inviting me to write, it was a pleasure. Written August 7, 2015 By: Casarah Nance & Richard Lamoureux For Shadow Hamilton's "Partner up" contest.

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Date: 9/9/2015 1:17:00 AM
Wonderful collab Richard and Casarah! Congrats on superb win!
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Date: 9/8/2015 11:42:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful cas and Richard my congrats to you both:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/8/2015 8:49:00 AM
Happy Birthday Richard :) Also,, Congratulations on your - Partner up - contest win. **SKAT**
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/8/2015 9:04:00 AM
Thanks for the birthday greeting SKAT.
Date: 8/11/2015 6:41:00 AM
A wonderful penned, it extreme excellence.........A.M.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/11/2015 7:19:00 AM
Thanks A.M. ;0)
Date: 8/10/2015 4:34:00 PM
Between you and Cas, you have created a true masterpiece Richard, one to be read many times over...I especially like the internal rhyming in line three of the first three verses. Totally in sync...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/11/2015 7:21:00 AM
Thanks Tim, I enjoyed writing with Cas.
Date: 8/10/2015 1:06:00 PM
Thank you for collaborating with me Richard, this turned out fantastic, you are such a treasure xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/10/2015 2:40:00 PM
It was my pleasure, thanks for getting us started and providing the foundation on which to build. Have you posted it yet? Hugs Rick.
Date: 8/10/2015 9:17:00 AM
Great work you've done with Cas, Rick. Innocence and warmth, trust and being steadfast can be gleaned from your lines. A 7 . Congrats to both of you! hugs!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/10/2015 10:12:00 AM
Thanks Kim for your thoughtful visit.
Date: 8/9/2015 2:07:00 PM
Both you are great poets so this great poem penned with beautiful words. Nice collaboration my lovely friend. 7 ++, Loved always,bl
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/10/2015 9:10:00 AM
Much appreciated BL.
Date: 8/9/2015 2:06:00 PM
Both you are great poets so this great poem penned with beautiful poem. Nice collaboration my lovely friend. 7 ++, Loved always,bl
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Date: 8/9/2015 9:39:00 AM
This write is extreme great, you penned it with vivid imagery and excellence.........A.M.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/10/2015 9:10:00 AM
Thanks A.M.
Date: 8/9/2015 12:36:00 AM
Now this is amazing, other than Cas is cheating on me, but , never the less, amazing poem!!!!! great write you two!!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/9/2015 7:47:00 AM
Good morning Arthur, I'm pleased you like it.
Date: 8/9/2015 12:02:00 AM
you two came up with a very precious poem. Loved the marshamallows which I envisioned as clouds. Way to go, you two.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/9/2015 7:48:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, Casarah was easy to write with.
Date: 8/8/2015 4:14:00 PM
Both authors use good imagery and maintains a poetic flow through the whole piece giving it an ethereal feel. Emile.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/9/2015 7:52:00 AM
Thanks Emile, mission accomplished!
Date: 8/8/2015 1:16:00 PM
Richard, so beautifully penned by both of you 7 and thanks for visiting my tribute poem
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/9/2015 7:53:00 AM
You are most welcome Constance. Thanks for visiting and for giving us a seven.
Date: 8/8/2015 11:26:00 AM
Wonderful poem. Super 7 on this gem my friends!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/9/2015 7:54:00 AM
Aww thanks Robert.;0)
Date: 8/8/2015 10:54:00 AM
Two great poets......how couldn't write be anything but fantastic.....lovely poem! Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/8/2015 11:18:00 AM
Thanks Eileen, hugs Rick.
Date: 8/8/2015 9:48:00 AM
Stunning piece Rick! First stanza was so captivated! Loved it :) thank you for your previous visit Rick, it's been a while :p wishing you a great day there, hug, yanny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/8/2015 11:18:00 AM
You as well Sun Shine!
Date: 8/8/2015 8:05:00 AM
Absolutely lovely! Truly enjoyed soaking in these beautiful, flowing words!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/8/2015 8:23:00 AM
Thanks for being the first to comment.

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