Get Your Premium Membership

Stolen Brighter Day

Stolen Brighter Day Sir Lancelot, my one true love, Was sent to me from God above. In the kingdom of my dreams Fantasies have many themes. Real world longings seek thereof. Oh, knight in armor come my way. Let’s kiss and love the night away. Two peas snuggled in a pod. Holding to God’s iron rod. NO! Satan stole my brighter day. Inspired by Carolyn Devonshire’s “Jousting Surprise”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/13/2010 10:32:00 AM
Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today Dane Ann and the best to you in the contset. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 8/13/2010 9:52:00 AM
If the "knight" lifted the mask and saw what was seen in "Jousting Surprise," indeed, one could say Satan stole your "brighter day." Great entry for the contest, Dane Ann. Thanks for writing it and I enjoyed your company at dinner last night! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things