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Where can home be found, when mother can’t pick up the phone? I follow her in patchwork, until I see her brilliance, once again, in heaven. happiness wrap me in a queen-sized quilt, with love’s vagabond stitches and perfect peace of mind. I’m like a wandering gypsy without a home still, my dad does care for the sick. The exchange, of my mom’s compassionate and push-away arms and her plum-personality, for my dad’s smile. I get all wrapped up in that, too - the even, zigzag stitches, like glue. 3/29/2022

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Date: 4/2/2022 3:14:00 PM
I loved the comparison to a warm hand-stitched quilt. I have several of those myself. Wonderful it is to have the memories to comfort me while I wait to see her again. Bless you, Kim. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2022 6:36:00 PM
Yes…exactly ~ hugs
Date: 3/31/2022 10:04:00 PM
Love the poetry, and the dedication, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2022 6:36:00 PM
Thank you, Harry! :)
Date: 3/30/2022 10:19:00 AM
Great write...masterful...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/30/2022 6:06:00 PM
Thank you, Pashang!
Date: 3/30/2022 1:35:00 AM
A great tribute to your mother and father. Alas we all have to go some day. But our memories will be retained. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/30/2022 6:06:00 PM
We hold them dear, Victor! ~ hugs, my friend!
Date: 3/29/2022 7:10:00 PM
beautiful loving poetry! Every life a patchwork-quilt of dreams and memories. You seem to have several extra patches of love.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/30/2022 6:05:00 PM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 3/29/2022 5:29:00 PM
Beautiful tribute, Kim -- threaded with lines of warmth, caring and love. :) Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/29/2022 7:02:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 3/29/2022 12:22:00 PM
Kim! OMG! Wow! I do truly wish I’d written this fabulous poem! The descriptions of mom & dad even fit my own…plus, I embroider, & recently posted a poem titled Vagabonds. Blessings of life & inspiration on you! This poem blesses my heart. A Fav I will copy out to put in my scrapbook. Hugs! sally
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/29/2022 1:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sally! Emotions flying as it approaches the first anniversary of mom’s death.
Date: 3/29/2022 10:37:00 AM
Hi Kim. Forms or words have yet to impress me. I don’t know why! Perhaps prose is better,for me. Or...not writing at all? Your poem sparkles with your soul, your family, truth and joy...these poems lighten my day and this is a wonder. Phenomenal energy and imagery. Pangie xo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/29/2022 1:24:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/29/2022 8:42:00 AM
Well said, Kim. I loved the way your poem flowed in zigzag fashion, which highlighted your theme.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/29/2022 9:49:00 AM
Thank you, Milton!
Date: 3/29/2022 7:53:00 AM
Stiches zigzagged with love, Wonderful write Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/29/2022 9:49:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph!

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