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Stinky Feet

Feet Feet stink Feet stinking Foot odor bad now Shoes off odor penetrates air Odor flows gradually around room uncomfortable Odor flows gradually around room very uncomfortable someone please grab the Frebreze

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Marie Foster

Date: 8/6/2009 12:48:00 PM

this one gave me a laugh

James Fraser

Date: 8/3/2009 2:55:00 AM

Gave me a laugh Sara, James

William Kershaw

Date: 8/2/2009 4:15:00 PM

Sara, This was a welcome chuckle on an otherwise very unpleasant day. Been there, smelled that. Used the T-shirt to cover my nose. Excellent write. Love, Will

William Kershaw

Date: 8/2/2009 4:14:00 PM

Sara, This was a welcome chuckle on an otherwise very unpleasant day. Been there, smelled that. Used the T-shirt to cover my nose. Excellent write. Love, Will

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/2/2009 11:22:00 AM

LOL....funny write my friend..love the last line..brought a smile.