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Stinking Thinking

A barren man in a barren land, Not welcomed by my own kind, Peeking through curtains stained by my own pain, My soul beckons for the end of time. In this hollow shell dwells my own hell, Tormenting me day and night So ive chosen to embrace being alone in this race, Rather than expose my deepest fright So is it so odd I still cry to God To please come set me free From thoughts unkind in my shattered mind, Please God rescue me from me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/23/2012 6:10:00 PM
awesome words you got there Carl,,, I have written the line "set me free " in a few of my poems. and thank you for reading my "Market Place.
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Carl Fraser
Date: 11/23/2012 6:59:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting Debbie, it is much appreciated

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