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Stillness

Watching out of windows lush green mountains on a rainy day I saw fog slowly descent from up It covered the mountain, spread all over the surroundings Nothing was visible except white fog Felt I was in sky, heaven surrounded by clouds There was no noise birds hiding, trees still, no breeze, no movement whatsoever I felt tranquil and joyous 31.10.2021 For Constance La France Contest Name ''S'' Contest

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Date: 11/7/2021 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely story/write. I feel like I am there. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 11/6/2021 6:02:00 AM
Rama, wonderful and joyous writing and congratulations on your Third Place win in my "S" Contest ~ love and serenity_ Constance
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 11/6/2021 7:48:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 11/6/2021 12:43:00 AM
Vivid illustration of one's being carried away by the silent stillness. Great work! Congratulations!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 11/6/2021 7:48:00 AM
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Date: 10/31/2021 11:50:00 AM
I use to live in the Nilagiri hills! This was a constant occurrence!! You take me back 35 years!!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 10/31/2021 12:09:00 PM
Thanks. That made me smile. Saw this from bedroom window on rainy day
Date: 10/31/2021 11:43:00 AM
The wonders of creation that never ceases to amaze me. Tom
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 10/31/2021 12:08:00 PM
Thanks

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