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Stilllooking

Lines of blow Half bottle of whiskey Sun coming thru Ripped curtain Glistening black hair Almond skin Strangers names Inked Finally stirring Black eyes awake One more time Orgasmic Slipped away Never look back Hot windy day New journey Goodbye Isabella

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/27/2023 7:51:00 PM

First, I want to say that I really like the way your words caress the page. "Second: Hot windy day - New journey." Sounds like the perfect opportunity to try something new. Keep reaching for the stars. :) Brandy

Richard Ferry
Date: 1/28/2023 3:26:00 PM

Never tap out

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2022 10:18:00 AM

hmmm, not sure how to take that one. Isabella gone forever?

Richard Ferry
Date: 12/27/2022 5:08:00 PM

Just the way it reads Onward to next journey Hope your well