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Still the Same Man In My Own Right

I caressed your body all along the day, Planted my affection on your lips Surely it will stay there forever. Hope, will stay there forever. I was a man of great dreams and desires I never treated you a subordinate eve What I gave you was privileged pleasure I never gave you the pain of childbirth It was I who ate the forbidden fruit of Eden. Committing adultery in my old age. I was a man of great dreams and desires. Now that you have left me for reason, I have unlearnt to find safe line Between teasing and pleasing you. I am yet to learn the difference Between bare-breasts & fashionable breasts. I am still the same man in my own right I have crossed to the other side And I can’t ever go back. I am still the same man in my own right +++ September 1, 2014 Form: Free Verse Dr. Ram Mehta Contest: When Doing Wrong feels So Right by Jared Pickett

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Date: 9/1/2014 4:12:00 PM
gosh, I was thinking maybe this was for the confessions contest. Other poems of yours I have read, led me to believe you are now divorced? Is that true? I enjoyed the sincerity of this one.
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 9/2/2014 4:46:00 AM
We have celebrated 55th Marriage Anniversary last May.
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 9/2/2014 4:43:00 AM
Andrea. We are still strongly united and in our late seventies. I will be 80 years old this September 30.
Date: 9/1/2014 3:44:00 PM
excellent write Dr Mehta:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/1/2014 2:54:00 PM
Well done, Dr. Ram. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 9/1/2014 8:11:00 AM
Brilliant write Dr Ram. Good luck to u.
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Date: 9/1/2014 7:43:00 AM
Excellent. Good Luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/1/2014 7:01:00 AM
a good take Ram well penned gl in contest hugs
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Date: 9/1/2014 6:48:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs
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