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Still the Creed

Still the creed: That serves you salt not from tears, That decorates you not with fakes, That builds you castle not in the air, Quenches your thirst not with mirage- Buoyancy that keeps you afloat, Oasis from which you forever fetch- Love is still the creed. Still the creed: That gives you edge to triumph, And buys you admiration far and near, And stands by you in battle field Provides you succour in distress, Bliss like sleep,sleep like slumber; Quoted price on paradise share- Truth is the creed. Still the creed: Shield from worldly trauma Visor against its deadly sword Spring of honour and laurel; Moon shines at work in the night, Sun shines at work in the day, Man shines by the work he does- Work is still the creed. Still they are the creeds: Work,truth and love. 23rd Nov,2014.

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Date: 12/8/2014 9:25:00 PM
Wise and inspiring words, Kayod! Congrats on a wonderful win!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/8/2014 10:29:00 PM
Thank you for this visit Rhonda and have a wonderful day....huggs
Date: 12/8/2014 8:26:00 PM
Very inspirational poem, congrats on the win
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Date: 12/8/2014 10:28:00 PM
Thank you Dr. ,have a wonderful day...huggs
Date: 12/8/2014 1:20:00 PM
I read your winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/8/2014 2:08:00 PM
Thank you mother in the house,thank you Sara Kendrick; may the Lord of hosts reward you for the support...huggs
Date: 12/8/2014 11:54:00 AM
An excellent write, Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/8/2014 2:04:00 PM
My friend is here,my Maurice Yvonne,thank you for the visit...huggs
Date: 12/8/2014 10:19:00 AM
A remarkable way of expressing this inspiring poem ! Well done !
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Date: 12/8/2014 2:11:00 PM
A prayer answered,sweet words from Carrie Richards! What shall I render? Immense thanks from the heart that truly appreciates you...huggs
Date: 12/8/2014 10:17:00 AM
Thank you for entering and God bless you. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 12/8/2014 1:56:00 PM
Words can not express my joy,thank you for the contest and my Placement Gina,you have done me honour,may the Lord of hosts reward you in folds...huggs
Date: 12/8/2014 9:39:00 AM
Wonderful poem and message, Kayod5. congratulations on your win! Sandra
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Date: 12/8/2014 1:53:00 PM
May the Lord of hosts bless you Sandra,your greeting worths millions...huggs
Date: 12/8/2014 7:57:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats Kayod5:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/8/2014 1:51:00 PM
Thank you Jan,your message is my pride...huggs
Date: 12/8/2014 1:35:00 AM
Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 12/8/2014 1:48:00 PM
Thank you very much Rob,it is nice to hear from you...huggs
Date: 11/30/2014 6:25:00 PM
Work, truth and love are three words to live by. If we remember to include them in everything we do, we will be alright... I like the message you send in these wise words. A great poem, Kayode!
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Date: 11/23/2014 10:43:00 PM
I love the patterning of this one to spell out work, truth and love. they are clearly your most valued creeds!!
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Date: 11/23/2014 9:18:00 AM
Exceptionally articulated with the right tenor and blend of images Kayod5. Very Well-Done indeed. A "7" from me and this one is a FAV. Best Always, Gary
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Date: 11/23/2014 10:04:00 AM
Hey Gary,you have really made my day; immense thanks for your kindness and goodness...huggs
Date: 11/23/2014 5:21:00 AM
Very well stated my friend..cheers
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Date: 11/23/2014 4:58:00 AM
wise wise words indeed Kayod5 love the great description you have used :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/23/2014 4:18:00 AM
How exception and full of wisdom....So many lines I loved in this piece..."Quenches your thirst not with mirage...Oasis from which you forever fetch." How lovely...I love the word creed. We need them in our lives and you have chosen three exceptional ones.
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Date: 11/23/2014 3:09:00 AM
How true Kayode ! Wonderful write n fine choice of words here ! Perfect work!
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Date: 11/23/2014 3:30:00 AM
Thank you Dr,nice to hear from you; happy Sunday...huggs

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